Obey - Owning The Omega (Gay Alpha Mpreg), by Savannah Quinn
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Obey - Owning The Omega (Gay Alpha Mpreg), by Savannah Quinn
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Luke, an enthusiastic young Alpha warrior with an insatiable desire to fill an Omega hole, is standing on the outskirts of the Omega village of Balzan. He’s never felt the tightness of an Omega before, but that’s going to change today. He intends to rush the village to find a concubine to replenish the Alpha population, but that all changes when he locks eyes on Aden. Aden has never set eyes on an Alpha before today. His head has been filled with stories and tall tales. But he discovers the truth when he finally crosses paths with Luke. Everyone has a place in the world. And Aden is about to find out that an Omega belongs on his knees, and an Alpha belongs inside of an Omega. This is a gay short story.
Obey - Owning The Omega (Gay Alpha Mpreg), by Savannah Quinn- Amazon Sales Rank: #330766 in eBooks
- Published on: 2015-03-19
- Released on: 2015-03-19
- Format: Kindle eBook
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10 of 10 people found the following review helpful. Needs development By Lora905 OK, a few things wrong here, besides the occasional editing mishap. There was a bit of an issue with the language not staying 100% true to the time, or should I say the perceived time. The biggest issue with this story is that there is TOO MUCH plot for 23 pages. Yes, it's good to have some storyline added in with the sex; book this short are usually all about the sex. But this book is 99.9% story and 0.01% sex. If you're not going to focus on just sex then 23 pages is not going to do your story nor your readers any justice. And on top of that, the writing may not have been perfect, but it was shaping up to be a pretty decent story! The part about all Omegas fleeing and building their own villages; misguided legends told by elders; dwindling populations; and apparently there was a war. These things only received mere mentions in the story. I mean, the battle between Ragard and Luke, as well as the blossoming of something between Luke & Aden: so much more could have & should have been done with those 2 plot devices. Also, as to the parenthetical portion of the title mentioning Mpreg, there is no mention of it in the actual story. While there is a quick romp in an open field (that is much too short to have time to be hot) the only indication that Aden can even become pregnant is right before they fight, Ragard says that Aden should bear his son, not Luke's. After a 2nd fight, the story abruptly ends. We have no idea if Aden became pregnant from that one, 90 second encounter, or if he and Luke stay together. But honestly, if this were to be expanded into something longer, with some character development, world building, and editing, I would definitely reread it.
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